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Monday, November 8, 2021

The Old City...

 


This was where I used to live it had malls! shops! everything you needed! and houses of course. until..the ocean!! it kept rising and rising I climbed the building, I got to the top and i was exhausted I sat down, the water! it stopped rising! but.. it had filled the whole city! I was really scared.. then i saw more people! they were sitting down, I ran over to see who was on the building when I got there I saw my auntie and my father then I looked at the other buildings there were so many people. I looked down... Ahhh! a shark was down in the water I looked again there was another one! I ran away from the edge and decided to jump off in the boat that I saw in the water, I jumped I was screaming "AAAAAAAAA!" I landed on a matres on the boat we drove away in the boat. I realised I had fell asleep, I woke up and we were at a island there was a house! the person who saved me was something like josh he was 23 we lived in that house happily ever after!:D Now Im 54 And still Living in The House. and the boy who saved me has sadly passed. i still don't believe it happend  i haven't gone back in years now, i really want to go back.. but i want to keep safe. i was 11 when this happend i was very smart to jump otherwise i might not have survived. the end!


1 comment:

  1. Hi Aria. I really like you post. I like how you added the photo as a reference of what it would look like if it happened in real life. Maybe next time you could check you spelling and make your I's when your talking about yourself just make sure they are capitals because your talking about you. Bye:D Everley

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