Written by Aria Stanton
Hi I am looking for my friend Bob. He is a mint green alien with glamorous skin. He is 100cm tall and has slick hair on his body. His eyes are white and he was last seen wearing pink underwear. I am his only family as he is a little weird and likes to stomp on people. He could be hiding in a cave because it is his favourite place.
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Hi Aria, Your writing made me smile. I could picture a cute cheeky green alien who gets into a little mischief....he might be a little sad in the cav by himself though. I hope he finds you soon. Awesome descriptive work!
ReplyDeleteThis is a funny description Aria. I could imagine his glamourous skin and pink undies. I wonder if the picture in my head is the same as how you imagine Bob. That is the great thing about describing, we all create our own images. Ka Pai.
ReplyDeleteHi Aria, wow, what a great description of your friend Bob. It put a smile on my face when reading this. I have a challenge for you, would you be able to draw a missing poster of your friend Bob to help you find him. Good Luck, I'd love to see what you come up with.
ReplyDeleteLove the story that goes with your picture. Do you want to add your picture? I can help if you need help.
ReplyDeleteyes i would like to add the picture i just didn't have time.
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